Paper Self-Review

1. I am happy with my paper so far. It meets the standards and criteria of how the paper look and feel. I think I could do a little more elaborating on my experience, but otherwise I am happy with it.
2. After looking at my peers papers over the past week, I have noticed that each of my peers, including myself, described simple and honest events that had a big impact on their lives. This helped me come up with more ideas for my final paper, as well as what needed to be fixed and revised.
3. I feel like I need to have more descriptions and feeling in it.
4. I wrote about how, for the first time, I got a taste of something new and exotic and how it left me wanting more.
5. I wanted to show readers that even though my paper was about something simple, I wanted readers to come away with how big the impact was on my life.